Score: 4

"Needs Fixing"

submission: Three Play

date: April 14, 2008

For whatever reason, it seems that this game doesn't work very well on my computer, I have been a very decent Stepmania and DDR player for a while now, and the sensitivity of the steps isn't responding at all to my keystrokes.

In the case of the content, it is decent. I wish I could say more about this game, but until I can get the game to run correctly, I can't really give a score higher than what I have.

Score: 7

"Quality Counts"

submission: Final Fantasy 7 -Remnant-

date: April 1, 2008

Alright, I'll list a few points that I was looking over.

First some positives; I definitely like the humorous feel that the flash gives off, stereotyping some of the characters was a funny touch that had me snickering for a good while. Also, much of the flash animation was very well done, it may not have been completely accurate as far as FF7 goes, but it did give that amusing vibe that makes this flash one to remember. The theme and thoughts of what had occurred though, it made for a very interesting idea for the future of the game, even if it was a spin-off. I commend you for this effort.

Now some negatives, much of the grammar was quite a bit off, which threw me off for a bit when I was trying to understand what was being said. That brings me to my second problem, the lack of voice clarity. It wasn't too bad, but some of the voices sounded too garbled for me to understand what was being said. In the future, I would recommend checking the grammar a little bit before finishing up the flash, as well work a bit on the clarity of the voice acting.

You're definitely going somewhere with this, and I wouldn't mind seeing more of this. I only recommend what I said above, the rest seems to fit well for you, and I encourage you to continue it.

- Burin

Score: 6

"Interesting..."

submission: Neskin's Influence

date: March 23, 2008

Alright, a bit constructive here:

I like the fact that the movie seemed to depict Neskin's Influence upon the doctor, and in the case of what happened, possibly even ruin that doctor's career as a credible surgeon.

What I didn't really understand was what Neskin was attempting to actually accomplish by this, was his action an attempt to actually sabotage the surgeon, or was it perhaps out of chaos' sake? Whatever the case, I found the flow of the animation to be well done, though I think some of the camera shots were kind of unnecessary.

Otherwise, looking forward to the next step in Neskin's reign of mischief and, well, chaos!

- Burin

Score: 5

"Good Mood, Poor Emphasis"

submission: Breath of Fire 3 -Final Battle

date: February 20, 2008

I'm at a mixed feel of this track, I'll try and break it down into positives and negatives.

Positives would be the potential I see for this song, I absolutely love that you were able to morph this song into something more than a hard sounding song, and actually turned it into something eerie, in a sense, the final battle is SUPPOSED to feel eerie, I mean come on, that fight is both a long haul, and it's creepy! The aura of the song also seemed to give me a feel of what the background should have been. If I recall correctly, the background in that fight was almost non-apparent, this eerie song tends to give it the background it needed.

Now for the negatives, part of changing the song a bit with the eerie feeling hurt how the song felt, some of the effects seemed to "carry over" when the next part of the song was transitioning. As well, I felt that some of the main parts of the beat were not apparent in the song, which weakened its impact a little. If you want the song to be eerie and scary, perhaps emphasis on those a little more, and give your listeners a bit more of a scare.

I think the track overall is one worth listening to, that's for sure, I just think that it could use some tuning up. As a big fan of BoFIII, I thank you for giving your great effort to this song, and all the BoFIII Songs you've worked on. I hope to hear more from you!

Score: 6

"Fair."

submission: Breath of Fire 3 - Technology

date: February 20, 2008

I don't really know a word I can describe this one with aside from fair. I like the saxophone in the song, but I disliked the lack of emphasis on some parts of the song's beat, it sounded muffled, and I couldn't really notice that part of it.

Otherwise, the song did stay well synchronized throughout, only part that I felt got a little stilted in that was the ending with the saxophone, it felt like the tempo slowed a little.

Score: 8

"Not bad."

submission: Breath of Fire 3 - Overworld

date: February 20, 2008

Stays quite true to the original beat, I like that, the only thing I did not like is it sounded like a loose note played through the song at an off-tone feel to it, it kind of grated at my ears. I'd only suggest to perhaps harmonize that part a little more, other than that though, very beautiful song.